It's time for Microfiction Monday with Susan, of Stony River! Write the shortest of short fiction, 140 characters or less (including spaces & punctuation) inspired by a picture Susan provides. Hope you'll come write along!
I warn you to watch your every step. With each open door passed, psychic memory flashes of tortured souls flood your very being.
(128 characters, including spaces & punctuation)
Hope everyone has had a great weekend! Ours continues for one more day with the kidlets home, even though Hubby has to work. I see a Lego filled crafty kind of day ahead! What does yours hold?
I don't want to go there, scary for sure. But I do love to read about it. Excellent scare!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nightmare, Karen!! LOL
ReplyDeleteI will be sure to remember this warning, you won't find me here anytime soon ;-)
ReplyDeleteNice idea. Even worse than ghosts, perhaps: free-floating bad memories.
ReplyDeleteLike spirits with a twist! A good one!
ReplyDeleteKaren,
ReplyDeleteI am new to micro ficition Mondays and just discovered and signed onto your blog as a follower. Please do the same on mine http://lindaoconnell.blogspot.com/ I like your introduction about yourself.
Sounds like a hallway I want to avoid at all costs...
ReplyDeleteSounds like a hallway I'd want to avoid at all costs!
ReplyDeleteEeeeek! No thank you :O)
ReplyDeleteDefinitely don't want to get caught in that hallway!! Terrific take on the pic of the day, Karen! Have a great week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
This is really cool!
ReplyDeleteSounds spooky, like the Hotel California!
ReplyDeleteReading this one at night would scare the bee geesus out of me-LOL! Great tale!
ReplyDeleteI'm with Mrs. Fence. Welcome to the Hotel California. You can check out any time, but you can never leave. Eeeeiiuu.
ReplyDeleteScary one this week! I think I would not walk past any more of those doors--turn around, turn around!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat micro fiction.
That is a very cool micro fiction! Great job, not sure I can ever stop at 140 characters. (although Twitter makes me, lol)
ReplyDeletespooky and vivid in 128 characters. wow. that's how it's done, y'all!
ReplyDeleteVery creative! I'll have to check her site out!
ReplyDeleteWHAT a cool and haunting picture, Kare! I remember going down a hallway at Kirby Cove in the Marin Headlands when I was a kid - I was TERRIFIED! This is SUCH fun!
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