Sunday, February 13, 2011

Microfiction Monday - {The Temptress}

Its time for Microfiction Monday, hosted by Susan of Stony River! She posts a pic and we write with 140 characters (including punctuation & spaces) or less. What tale will you spin?


Legend tells of the Temptress' lips,
Rapidly luring her next Romeo.
With each expelled breath,
He willingly becomes her next tale o' woe.

(140 characters, including punctuation & spaces)




Won't you write along?  I'd love to read what you come up with!

22 comments:

  1. Ooooooowwwww you are GOOOOOOOD!

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  2. Oh, the power of feminine wiles...leading a young man to his fall. Great poem!

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  3. Love it. It so fits the picture. Great.

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  4. Oh, great one for the day! Hope you have a good week! Enjoy!

    Sylvia

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  5. Looks to me like she's telling him a "THING OR TWO" with a finger for emphasis. But he's clearly smitten anyway.

    Well done!

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  6. We should never underestimate the power of a woman
    I love this karen!

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  7. She must be the fault-finding sort, then?

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  8. Oh, well done. Femme fatale kind, huh?

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  9. Perfect for this week's pic. Terrific microfiction.

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  10. Ooh, wicked woman, foolish young man but he wouldn't be told.

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  11. Lovely poem. Ain't that the truth in love.... :O)

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  12. Love this sad tale on Valentine's Day! Very appropriate, it seems to me.

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  13. Yours is the only one I've read so far focusing on anyone other than the poor solitary soul! Good one!

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  14. Romeos do tend to roam... LOL

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  15. Karen, I like this! Does the world need more of these Romeo doers-inners?
    ..

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