Its time for Microfiction Monday, hosted by Susan of Stony River! She posts a pic and we write with 140 characters (including punctuation & spaces) or less. What tale will you spin?
Legend tells of the Temptress' lips,
Rapidly luring her next Romeo.
With each expelled breath,
He willingly becomes her next tale o' woe.
Rapidly luring her next Romeo.
With each expelled breath,
He willingly becomes her next tale o' woe.
(140 characters, including punctuation & spaces)
Won't you write along? I'd love to read what you come up with!
Ooooooowwwww you are GOOOOOOOD!
ReplyDeleteOh, the power of feminine wiles...leading a young man to his fall. Great poem!
ReplyDeleteLove it. It so fits the picture. Great.
ReplyDeleteOh, great one for the day! Hope you have a good week! Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
that is pretty! I like!
ReplyDeleteLooks to me like she's telling him a "THING OR TWO" with a finger for emphasis. But he's clearly smitten anyway.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Perfectly done!
ReplyDeleteWe should never underestimate the power of a woman
ReplyDeleteI love this karen!
Is this a biography? ;)
ReplyDeleteI'm sure he wasn't complaining.
ReplyDeleteShe must be the fault-finding sort, then?
ReplyDeleteOh, well done. Femme fatale kind, huh?
ReplyDeletePerfect for this week's pic. Terrific microfiction.
ReplyDeleteOoh, wicked woman, foolish young man but he wouldn't be told.
ReplyDeleteTale of woe! indeed, thanks!
ReplyDeleteno wonder he looks so worried
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Ain't that the truth in love.... :O)
ReplyDeleteLove this sad tale on Valentine's Day! Very appropriate, it seems to me.
ReplyDeleteOoh! I like it...
ReplyDeleteYours is the only one I've read so far focusing on anyone other than the poor solitary soul! Good one!
ReplyDeleteRomeos do tend to roam... LOL
ReplyDeleteKaren, I like this! Does the world need more of these Romeo doers-inners?
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