Sunday, February 27, 2011

The Shoe Fairy ~ Microfiction Monday #72

It's time for Microfiction Monday with Susan, of Stony River! Write the shortest of short fiction, 140 characters or less (including spaces & punctuation) inspired by a picture Susan provides. Hope you'll come write along!


With my pixie dust puff, the intended will be spry and light as a wispy weed's seed in the breeze. Seek your next adventure...slip it on!

(135 characters, including spaces & punctuation)


Hope you had a fun weekend! It seemed to be a movie weekend for us.  There was the usual Friday night, Movie Night for the kidlet's, who got to see How To Train Your Dragon (that Hubby & I enjoyed and *had* to watch with them!) for the first time and Inception arrived for us grownups.  What new movies have you seen?

25 comments:

  1. "wispy weed's seed in the breeze. Seek..." I love the alliteration and repetitive "ee"...very poetic prose. I like the upbeat, adventurous feel to this story. It's a happy microfiction!

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  2. I think I'll slip that shoe right on now! Would love the adventure!
    Good and uplifting.

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  3. Loved this. It filled me with the anticipation and joy.

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  4. Yes, please. I would REALLY like to wear THAT shoe! My baby girl makes her own brand of pixie dust, but all it does is make me want to drop everything and CUDDLE! {I like that, too, but it's HARD to get stuff done, if ya know what I mean! ACK!} This was FUN, Kare! I love creative writing YOU!

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  5. Enchanted shoes for a long journey?

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  6. I am curious to see where it will take her

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  7. Now that's a cool shoe :-)
    Nice one.

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  8. Very cheering story on a cold Monday morning. Thank you.

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  9. Fresh thinking there, and the idea is certainly an attractive one.

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  10. Now that sounds like great material for a brilliant children's story! :O)

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  11. Wispy Weed sounds like a good name for an ugly fairy!

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  12. great idea! adventure- always good, thanks-

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  13. I'd like to go on an adventure like that one. Lovely! :O)

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  14. Where can I get a shoe with such a magical spell?

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  15. I want me a pair of shoes like those!!

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  16. Ohhh--can I have a pair of those shoes? I need adventure in my life right now...
    Loved your mm...have a great week. Cheers~

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  17. I like your fairy blessings. Reminds me dandelions will soon be here.

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  18. Your words flow awfully well-very creative!

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  19. That shoe might just well FIT my fat feet...grin!
    Thanks for good 140.
    PEACE!

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  20. How whimsical and sweet! Definitely one of my favourites....:)

    Lynette
    Imagination Lane

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  21. So beautiful and delicate, nice poem!

    My kids loved How to Train Your Dragon!

    Stopped over from TRDC :-)

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  22. I find microfiction, flash fiction, short fiction - all of that - to be really fascinating. Especially, using it for "Twitter stories." That was really good. I've always been more long-winded in my writing, so I find this challenging. However, it's definitely good practice for condensing your writing, especially for novelists, so they won't get too wordy. Good job! Will have to try this sometime.

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  23. Wow! I'm impressed. I can't even get a tweet to stay under 140 characters!! LOVED it.

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  24. Missing microfiction?

    I'm hosting a new microfiction meme.
    Succinctly Yours
    begins on Monday, March 28th. Check out the link for the photo and optional word.
    Hope you'll join in.

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