Left behind, there was no need for the clock to mark their remaining heartbeats. Zero hour approached, soon they'd be little more than dust.
(140 characters, including spaces & punctuation)
Hope everyone has a wonderful week ahead!
5 days ago
Sunday, February 6, 2011
Its the end of the Earth and... Microfiction Monday #69
Time for more Microfiction Monday with Susan of Stony River! Its the shortest of short fiction (140 characters max, including spaces & punctuation...and I just made it this time!) based on a photo of Susan's choice. Come write along! :>
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Very interesting! Makes me think the fine old building will be demolished. Either that or something really bad is going to happen. Sounds like the beginning of a good novel.
ReplyDeleteA sad tale for today and well done! It is interesting to see how all of us see the same picture so differently! Hope you have a great week, Karen!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Very different take. Am always amazed that we all see something a little different in the picture each week.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice evening karen, Super Bowl is almost over.
How creative! I think everyone's entries will be very different this week!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your week, too!
♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥
Creative! Enjoyed it. :)
ReplyDeleteThe clock has stopped, the building no longer used, and it's time for the wrecking ball. Good insight.
ReplyDeleteOminous start to a thriller! Now I want to know more.
ReplyDeleteHappy blogoversary :)
ReplyDeleteI'm getting that some catastrophe is about to befall the town and those who failed to escape in time.
ReplyDeleteHappy Blogaversary, Karen! :)
ReplyDeleteA very nice ยต-fiction story full of intrigue.
You words coupled with the picture of this dreadfully old and gruesome looking building remind me of our execution chamber building at the Texas State Prison.
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You make me wonder what's about to happen. An explosion maybe?
ReplyDeleteAn alien landing where the unfit are to be vaporised or a flood they can't escape...your words conjure up so many possibilities...striking
ReplyDeleteClever one. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteIts them voguns again isn't it.
ReplyDeleteA little bit scary there..... Good one. :O)
ReplyDeleteVery different interpretation. Many stories suggested by your Micro.
ReplyDeleteHmm, good way to pass on, sounds like- thanks!
ReplyDeleteI love a microfiction that makes me wonder what happens next :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know what will happen, but it sent shivers down my spine. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteMy MM: Truth In Advertising
Very creative, and I could go several different ways with this. Aliens? Some sort of nuclear devastation? Intriguing.
ReplyDeleteWhoa, I love the sci-fi touch. Great MM.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week, Karen.
Ooh! I would definitely read this book!!!
ReplyDeleteGave me chills. Whoa. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI'm following you.
WHAT happened next! That's what inquiring minds want to know! {!}
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it very much, interesting and creative!
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