On the Move
After living on two coasts, in four states, twelve towns, sixteen abodes, standing still, she regained her momentum.

Easy peasy, right? Yeah, that's what I would have thought since microfiction and I are such fine friends.
But, micro memoir that's boiled down to a title & a tagline? Not so much! I wrote about a dozen or so, but this is the one I'm running with.
That is a LOT of places to live :)
ReplyDeleteI like it. I thought this was a tougher prompt than I anticipated!
I love that you're "running with" the one where you are "standing still."
ReplyDeleteIt's funny that yours is the first I'm reading because I almost went with one about how I've lived in the same home my entire life!
Sounds like a life full of adventure. I love this: " standing still, she regained her momentum." What an amazing line. Nicely done! One of my favorites today!
ReplyDeleteI, too, loved "standing still, she regained her momentum" - very nice. Packed with meaning - and I want to know more!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great job with this prompt. I liked the 'momentum' you created with this!
ReplyDeleteReally amazing! Well written friend!
ReplyDeleteOh, I like that. I like how it felt rushed then stopped you. So you could go "ahhh".
ReplyDeleteVery well done.
Sometimes it takes a moment to stand still just to catch up with ourselves. I can totally relate!
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