tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post918784031012117701..comments2024-02-08T04:58:53.425-08:00Comments on Time Crafted: Her Wind, Her Move ~ Red Writing HoodKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06572568205513606978noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-12075001966555556162011-03-21T12:14:48.426-07:002011-03-21T12:14:48.426-07:00I loved the personification of the wind. Using &qu...I loved the personification of the wind. Using "wiley wind" multiple times named it, made it an entity, a partner.<br /><br />For a bit, I was wondering if "she" was going to end up being a feather or some sort of inannimate object.<br /><br />In the end, I did wonder if the wind was literal or metaphorical and then had to wonder what force was behind it.<br /><br />Great writing, lady. Made me think. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-12132998472944759952011-03-20T10:07:56.045-07:002011-03-20T10:07:56.045-07:00I like the idea of how you are comparing the unpre...I like the idea of how you are comparing the unpredictability of the wind to where her life will go next.<br /><br />I got a little overwhelmed with some of the imagery. I felt like you used a lot of words to say some simple things. Not always bad, but sometimes your meaning gets lost in all the words.<br /><br />I really think this piece has TONS of potential! It's just so...beautiful. And sad. It's hard to make beauty and sadness marry, and you did that.Katiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03272418011408299181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-11911413050177229672011-03-19T20:07:10.345-07:002011-03-19T20:07:10.345-07:00Extremely well written. I enjoyed reading your wo...Extremely well written. I enjoyed reading your workLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287714494263781046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-58585288307783264822011-03-19T10:22:35.598-07:002011-03-19T10:22:35.598-07:00Such beautiful, poetic language describing such a ...Such beautiful, poetic language describing such a scary detour! Picking up and starting over- i hope it leads he where she needs to be!!Galit Breenhttp://theselittlewaves.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-61114213904062013122011-03-19T07:56:27.619-07:002011-03-19T07:56:27.619-07:00This is poetry. I am soooo bad at poetry!
I think...This is poetry. I am soooo bad at poetry! <br />I think this has a deep, underlying meaning for you. It is also written is such a way that anyone could take their own meaning from it. Good job!Brandon Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06609719408183527672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-60892560071370091642011-03-19T00:13:40.684-07:002011-03-19T00:13:40.684-07:00At first I found the repeated usage of the "w...At first I found the repeated usage of the "wiley wind" to be redundant, but as I kept reading, I realized that the story would not be the same if you took "wiley wind" out and made it something different. I enjoyed the imagery, and your words took me there, like I was watching.<br /><br />I really enjoyed this!<br /><br />I stopped in from The Red Dress Club.{Stephanie}The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01643310288610990260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-41684786950398201932011-03-18T22:01:53.220-07:002011-03-18T22:01:53.220-07:00Ooooow! My heart is kind of racing! I'm THER...Ooooow! My heart is kind of racing! I'm THERE, Kare! Magic! {!}Elisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08963887401621018102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-44897247406991125332011-03-18T21:50:12.239-07:002011-03-18T21:50:12.239-07:00The wind and the leaves really set a nice tone.The wind and the leaves really set a nice tone.Jackhttp://www.thejackb.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-68702557557534619242011-03-18T20:32:05.887-07:002011-03-18T20:32:05.887-07:00You have really great imagery and I like the metap...You have really great imagery and I like the metaphor of the wind. Particularly the line where it surfs the space.Ilana @ mommyshortshttp://themommyproject.typepad.com/blog_shorts/2011/03/detour.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-38301733367953111802011-03-18T18:20:51.651-07:002011-03-18T18:20:51.651-07:00I like the wily wind. I can see her following.
Go...I like the wily wind. I can see her following. <br />Good images, of leaves and the wind. The voices in the wind.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.com