tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post2428238575798949042..comments2024-02-08T04:58:53.425-08:00Comments on Time Crafted: Loose SpringKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06572568205513606978noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-19243871458883934732011-10-17T07:49:08.361-07:002011-10-17T07:49:08.361-07:00Love your definition of time craft! Nice post. :...Love your definition of time craft! Nice post. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-8144561522775268892011-10-16T19:51:07.733-07:002011-10-16T19:51:07.733-07:00Fantastic! I love the line... "Pulling a worn...Fantastic! I love the line... "Pulling a worn, folded up printout from her small pink satin bridesmaid purse she handed it to the artist." Such a wonderful image as well as meaningful line - that she'd been carrying this for so long.<br />Great motivation for us all to LOVE LIFE!<br />;)sarahhttp://sarahlipoff.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-3768439634392961182011-10-15T19:26:23.860-07:002011-10-15T19:26:23.860-07:00I'm so pleasantly distracted by the inkless ta...I'm so pleasantly distracted by the inkless tattoo!<br /><br />But we've been so focused on Maggie, it's nice to scratch beneath the surface of Adrianna, too!Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-48885872321835024462011-10-15T18:30:18.640-07:002011-10-15T18:30:18.640-07:00I love the small focused moment here- it pushes yo...I love the small focused moment here- it pushes your story -and your character development- forward.<br /><br />I I thought the dialogue rang especially true!Galit Breenhttp://theselittlewaves.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-83645485208315027282011-10-15T14:07:22.531-07:002011-10-15T14:07:22.531-07:00I really dig this... and I think you did a great j...I really dig this... and I think you did a great job. I definitely want to read more of the story!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02765882424929838652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-81828768940320723872011-10-15T09:46:28.967-07:002011-10-15T09:46:28.967-07:00Pulling stuff out is always okay. It still read we...Pulling stuff out is always okay. It still read well. And besides, no one says you can't put it back in if you ever finish off the complete story :)Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-50463510499424096052011-10-14T19:41:55.266-07:002011-10-14T19:41:55.266-07:00I totally love it. I've actually thought a lot...I totally love it. I've actually thought a lot about an inkless tattoo, so I was drawn in there. Well done.Margihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00380912871792176901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-40712670920390626932011-10-14T17:48:16.835-07:002011-10-14T17:48:16.835-07:00That was wonderful! You really brought me into th...That was wonderful! You really brought me into the story, wanting to know just what she was up to! <br /><br />Thanks for sharing...Tractor Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12313757434279815872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-2864378985164194732011-10-14T17:34:29.845-07:002011-10-14T17:34:29.845-07:00I absolutely think this read well! I like the ima...I absolutely think this read well! I like the image of her in her bridesmaid's dress, sitting in a tattoo parlor.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-84399038228214565062011-10-14T14:08:34.573-07:002011-10-14T14:08:34.573-07:00I think it's good to pull out a quick excerpt ...I think it's good to pull out a quick excerpt from a piece. You don't need every detail, and it forces you to make decisions about what's important. I think this read just fine!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-202705233899470109.post-74474943110870866112011-10-14T12:23:24.685-07:002011-10-14T12:23:24.685-07:00Definitely you pulled it off! Even though you say ...Definitely you pulled it off! Even though you say you edited, you managed to tell a complete story, paint a complete picture, right down to her black Jetta. Nicely done!Aliciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18196096131750922174noreply@blogger.com